a collection of work by 1st and 2nd semester sophomores
Kyle, red pencil is pretty fun to work in, huh?Your angle and perspective is working pretty nicely. It makes for an interesting emphasis on the subjects.The idea of a really sweet date, being canoed down a lovely river is pretty romantic, and I think that the girl's expression fits it pretty nicely. I really want to see it pushed a bit further. Yes, its romantic to go canoeing down a river together, but you could push the setting a bit more to make it that much more special. The drawing is there, but it needs that extra push to make the concept and idea of love that much stronger.Take care and hope you have a good weekend!
Hi, Thank you very much for the feed back! For the change of setting to make it more special, I will get on that. I will have see about how to do that without having to compete to much with the figures. Have a great weekend and see you next week.