a collection of work by 1st and 2nd semester sophomores
Cute concept, and I get your reference to the red string of fate. Playing upon that idea, I assume that these two are either meeting for the first time, or being reunited. That being the case, a more emphasized gesture or reaction could help sell the surprise of, "OH there's the person I love".You've done a pretty good job of filling up the city space with people, and please don't hate me for saying this, but I want more. A car, a crowd, it's a struggle to find the one that you're tied to! They have to fight through it to get to one another!Your colors could really help sell the idea of them being connected/soul mates. So push those hard!Take care and hope that you have a good weekend!