Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Technical Difficulties: Resolved

Here are my six sketches (finally). Again, I apologize they're a little late, but my scanner was fighting tooth and nail the whole way.
SimpleVast
Intimate
Cluttered
DeadlyQuiet

16 comments:

  1. these are interesting, its really clear which is which. I think I would go with intimate and vast, I'm not sure which one I'd pick for the third.

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  2. I like simple, vast, cluttered. I like the weird composition of the first one. Also, I like the narrowness of cluttered one! It's all well drawn

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  3. the perspectives are interesting, I think the bottom hammock piece the way it is tied to the tree at the angle its at is wierd tho

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  4. Simple, intimate, and quiet for me. The hammock was an excellent idea and the perspective on intimate really stresses the mood. Great work.

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  5. My favorites are simple, quiet and vast. The composition in the simple one is very unique, I like it a lot. Intimate seems a bit warped to me, but that may have been on purpose?

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  6. Simple Vast and Quiet

    Simple interprets the word in a less direct way

    Quiet: a hammock gives me the feeling of relaxing and sleeping in a quiet area. I also love the composition and cropping.

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  7. I like deadly a lot too actually, not too direct but that world seems unpleasant.

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  8. I like simple, vast and quiet one. But I think you can show more part of simple one because it is now seems bit squeezed in a uncomfortable way. Nice job with vast one! It reminds me of gigantic grand canyon. Simple one work really well in a ironic way with skull on the bar.

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  9. my favorites are simple, vast and deadly

    1-it communicates easily and has a nice composition
    2-this is drawn really well and has a really good perspective
    3- the perspective is a little off but with a little tweaking i think this could be a really interesting image
    4- its sort of hard to tell where this takes place but it definitely looks cluttered
    5-this my favorite. i like the abstract spike things coming out of the ground
    6-the hammock is a good object to use for quiet. maybe show the other tree to the right of the hammock?

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  10. simple: nice, I really like it
    vast: good but kind of obvious and generic
    intimate: change the angle to have both chairs fully in the frame
    cluttered: eh, can't think of much to say
    deadly: maybe more spikes and make them sharped
    quiet: I'd add some leaves to the tree (it sort of implies a windy cool day without them but that just may be me)

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  11. I really love your compositions across the board, I think cluttered could use more recognizable objects and not just various sized boxes. I think intimate should be tilted straight up, the angle is a little distracting. Can't wait to see the finished product.

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  12. My favorites are Quiet, Intimate, and Deadly, but it's a really close call. Those pointy things in deadly are super-cool, but perhaps if you used that sort of line quality elsewhere a different piece would be top-3.

    I like the subtle use of a theme here, that's probably my favorite quality about these.

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  13. deadly, cluttered and quiet are my favorites, but for quiet i wish the tree had more life. deadly had really good movement and cluttered was well handled

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  14. Very good drawings, sorry that your scanner was causing you problems! Some of these rectangles instead of squares, so see if you can rework those compositions finals.

    Simple - Good idea, and good composition.

    Vast - Looks really good so far, maybe you just need to extend that sky way up, it'll fix the square problem and add to the vastness.

    Intimate - A good intimate, if a bit strange. I would add a few more details, and instead of extending this one, maybe crop it down so that it's a square closer to the table.

    Cluttered - Crop this one down into a square, and add some more boxes on the floor to increase the cluttered look.

    Deadly - The mark and environment of this one is well on its way to being deadly - you just have to crop it into a square.

    Quiet - This is working really well, I would extend it on the right side.

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  15. I really enjoy deadly, vast, and simple. I especially love deadly, you did a great job making the environment look menacing.

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  16. vast intimate and quiet all seem to be more intelligently composed and have more charm. The other three don't see to really hold together very well at the moment.

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