I love some of the little details you've managed to get, like the hair in the guys legs. This might just be blogger's fault, but there doesn't seem to be much contrast overall..some of the darks could be brought out more, like in the couch for instance, maybe by adding more layers
haaaa, the expressions on their faces are so good. I love the guy on the left's "i'm sad and super deep" expression... haha. You've captured the feeling of it really well via style and detail and draftsmanship - the only thing i feel that's detracting is the color scheme -like Nicole said, it may be Blogger's fault a little but its pretty light. Also, i can see where you really paid careful attention to the rendering in the figures, then you lose it a little in the background where everything mushes together a little - I guess the couch, table and bottle could be defined just a little more.
Stylistically I love it. Also the shape you put them in is really intimate and I think was an excellent choice.
ReplyDelete↑ agreed :D, but I kind of want to see little more heavier weight in some part?
ReplyDeleteI love some of the little details you've managed to get, like the hair in the guys legs. This might just be blogger's fault, but there doesn't seem to be much contrast overall..some of the darks could be brought out more, like in the couch for instance, maybe by adding more layers
ReplyDeleteI really like the pose of the woman. I agree with Nicole it could use some more contrast.
ReplyDeletehaaaa, the expressions on their faces are so good. I love the guy on the left's "i'm sad and super deep" expression... haha. You've captured the feeling of it really well via style and detail and draftsmanship - the only thing i feel that's detracting is the color scheme -like Nicole said, it may be Blogger's fault a little but its pretty light. Also, i can see where you really paid careful attention to the rendering in the figures, then you lose it a little in the background where everything mushes together a little - I guess the couch, table and bottle could be defined just a little more.
ReplyDeleteI love the colors you've used, and the environment. Like previously stated, I think pushing the contrast on this a little more will resolve it.
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