I think the color is really nicely done, but the inkwork on the sidewalk could use a little help. I think that the sidewalk closest to the viewer is too dark; it jumps out too much and my eye keeps getting stuck there. Other than that I like your skewed perspective and curvy forms.
i really like the composition, i just wish that talk bubble with the 3 demon hounds (or w/e it is) wasn't there. I think it breaks up the flow of the piece
i really like the dull colors and the powerful triangular composition. The only suggestion i have for this is to rearrange the way you have the bulldozer positioned. right now it looks a little awkward
I think the color is really nicely done, but the inkwork on the sidewalk could use a little help. I think that the sidewalk closest to the viewer is too dark; it jumps out too much and my eye keeps getting stuck there. Other than that I like your skewed perspective and curvy forms.
ReplyDeletei really like the composition, i just wish that talk bubble with the 3 demon hounds (or w/e it is) wasn't there. I think it breaks up the flow of the piece
ReplyDeletei really like the dull colors and the powerful triangular composition. The only suggestion i have for this is to rearrange the way you have the bulldozer positioned. right now it looks a little awkward
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