tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post1552809548530966071..comments2023-03-19T10:47:43.996-04:00Comments on MICA: Sophomore Illustration: danamariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15696830706727662654noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-25838778014910632262009-09-29T13:21:55.572-04:002009-09-29T13:21:55.572-04:00i really like the dull colors and the powerful tri...i really like the dull colors and the powerful triangular composition. The only suggestion i have for this is to rearrange the way you have the bulldozer positioned. right now it looks a little awkwardMatthew Carignanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06889755335988089324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-91319350831934675782009-09-25T12:45:20.549-04:002009-09-25T12:45:20.549-04:00i really like the composition, i just wish that ta...i really like the composition, i just wish that talk bubble with the 3 demon hounds (or w/e it is) wasn't there. I think it breaks up the flow of the pieceJonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02899368634850624125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-54588966250294329312009-09-23T04:08:05.813-04:002009-09-23T04:08:05.813-04:00I think the color is really nicely done, but the i...I think the color is really nicely done, but the inkwork on the sidewalk could use a little help. I think that the sidewalk closest to the viewer is too dark; it jumps out too much and my eye keeps getting stuck there. Other than that I like your skewed perspective and curvy forms.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02715945748540976175noreply@blogger.com