Here's my attempt at my Illustration sketch. My words are Slurp, Clink, and Whack
It's unrefined in parts but this is the general idea. I'm portraying a golf resort that happens to have a lovely bistro in the back. A stretch but whack is kind of a tough one to mix into the food things. Obviously my portrayal is supposed to more funny but i'm not sure about it yet. I like clink and whack, but i feel like the kid 'slurping' his soup in the back is an after thought.
I'm totally unsure if i want to redraw the final or simply transfer it, so go all out if you don't like anything (composition, anatomy, ect ect.) I'm worried about it getting too central, and i feel like my details are getting overly tiny and are going to drive me crazy in the color stage.
Speaking of color, markers or watercolor (+ possibly colored pencil overtop?)