tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post27990968891784600..comments2023-03-19T10:47:43.996-04:00Comments on MICA: Sophomore Illustration: Slurp Clink Whackdanamariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15696830706727662654noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-81141093472194881762009-09-29T10:54:29.132-04:002009-09-29T10:54:29.132-04:00I think the composition is good and really easy to...I think the composition is good and really easy to follow because it's like divided into 3 parts, each part corresponding with one of your words.Carly Kriewaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05497687773372695243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-56919403208934114072009-09-28T13:22:57.559-04:002009-09-28T13:22:57.559-04:00Hey, this isn't really a comment, but if you r...Hey, this isn't really a comment, but if you read this, could you make sure that Danamarie knows that i'm going to be out sick tommorow. I sort of have the swine flu and i'm not sure if she'll get my e-mail cause my yahoo account is screwed up right now. thank you!Colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10069498639379706628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-58113114603394076402009-09-27T21:57:55.793-04:002009-09-27T21:57:55.793-04:00I know, I'm actually in the process of redrawi...I know, I'm actually in the process of redrawing the whole thing.<br /><br />And she's mad because a guy is hitting or should i say 'whacking' a golf ball off her cake. I moved the slurp up, and put the golf guy in the back, i think it works better now.Chelseahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15713161918724451254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-83116476787914761392009-09-27T18:36:02.255-04:002009-09-27T18:36:02.255-04:00I'm a little confused at what the lady on the ...I'm a little confused at what the lady on the left is doing... and I agree with you about the slurp being not as developed in comparison to the rest of the image. Besides that, it looks great, the composition really flows!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02715945748540976175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-41580347350534373352009-09-26T21:37:59.451-04:002009-09-26T21:37:59.451-04:00I see what you mean about the slurp being an after...I see what you mean about the slurp being an afterthought. i didn't even notice the kid in the background until i read it. But other then that it looks really nice. Don't paint over this though because we have to have both the pencil sketch and the final watercolor to turn in.Colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10069498639379706628noreply@blogger.com