steven-- totally appropriate for the music. couple of things-- 1.) the font needs to be VERY confident for this image to work. that means, ruler for straight lines, clean, not shaky edges and very well considered measurements as far as how the full name fits on the page and that, for example, Paul isnt larger than Oakenfold. 2.) im guessing the girls face will be affected, colorwise, by the radar lines--- that's cool... will it be flat graphic? if so, and actually even if not, spend some time reworking her face a little. its a bit off-- some of the lines arent clean enough for it to read as feminine and confident (like under her right eye, our left--- that line is really dark and thick in comparison to the other eye... her neck has too many wrinkles... things like that.) if shes gonna be graphic, embrace that and make the lines really crisp. if shes going to be tonal, make that drawing really believable. *dana
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im not happy with this but im sure il keep you guys updated
steven-- totally appropriate for the music. couple of things-- 1.) the font needs to be VERY confident for this image to work. that means, ruler for straight lines, clean, not shaky edges and very well considered measurements as far as how the full name fits on the page and that, for example, Paul isnt larger than Oakenfold. 2.) im guessing the girls face will be affected, colorwise, by the radar lines--- that's cool... will it be flat graphic? if so, and actually even if not, spend some time reworking her face a little. its a bit off-- some of the lines arent clean enough for it to read as feminine and confident (like under her right eye, our left--- that line is really dark and thick in comparison to the other eye... her neck has too many wrinkles... things like that.) if shes gonna be graphic, embrace that and make the lines really crisp. if shes going to be tonal, make that drawing really believable. *dana
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