lauren-- im thinking this design will put a lot of weight and importance on color (which is fine), but i think if that IS the case, the font needs to be bolder, more graphic & more "intentional" looking as well. And the figures should be more... something. Im curious to hear how you describe your client and what the narrative idea is here. it's a little "thin" right now, and not as gripping as it could be. potential though, for sure. *dana
lauren-- im thinking this design will put a lot of weight and importance on color (which is fine), but i think if that IS the case, the font needs to be bolder, more graphic & more "intentional" looking as well. And the figures should be more... something. Im curious to hear how you describe your client and what the narrative idea is here. it's a little "thin" right now, and not as gripping as it could be. potential though, for sure. *dana
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