Looks great! Really love the idea. I think some dramatic lighting can go a long way with this too in adding a sort of warm and inviting feeling to the space.
Great composition and story! The facial expressions and gesture of the couple are effective at telling the story. The knitted piece in the woman's gets a little lost because there isn't texture. Excited to see the finished piece!
The cropping is on point, it gives the piece an intimate feel. The mark making helps move my eye from point A to B. If you choose watercolor it might be interesting to add texture to certain areas with layered colored pencil? I really love this idea (:
This is a very cute card. The message is very creative, but definitely says "I want to get old with you baby." Haha.
ReplyDeleteThe cropping is beautiful, and the extra environment accents the card without it becoming a distraction.
I'm really looking forward to seeing this final.
This is so sweet! <3
ReplyDeleteThe expressions are nice. I would think about zooming out jussst a little, maybe.
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Not much to say about this, very adorable!
ReplyDeleteEmotionally touching :) I think if you work a bit more on the shadow (e.g. on her body), it will make the piece more dramatic. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteLooks great! Really love the idea.
ReplyDeleteI think some dramatic lighting can go a long way with this too in adding a sort of warm and inviting feeling to the space.
super cute. I love the old guy's face. I think it really hits home the fondness and warmness in the piece. I think this will be great.
ReplyDeleteGreat composition and story! The facial expressions and gesture of the couple are effective at telling the story. The knitted piece in the woman's gets a little lost because there isn't texture. Excited to see the finished piece!
ReplyDeleteThe cropping is on point, it gives the piece an intimate feel. The mark making helps move my eye from point A to B. If you choose watercolor it might be interesting to add texture to certain areas with layered colored pencil?
ReplyDeleteI really love this idea (: