these are really beautifully drawn! The only thing I would have to say is maybe add a little more of an indication of a background-like trees or houses?
Michelle-- these *are* very nicely drawn. I'm not entirely sure what the story is. I think the man is meeting the woman in the first one and Im assuming by the last one they are together/in love? But what is happening in the middle panel? Where are they going and does it relate to them at the end (are they enduring something together, is this later the same day, is it years later?). Im also not sold on the border with the yin yang... It isnt really adding to the image visually, nor does it seem necessary narratively. viewed as single illustrations, I think it would be distracting.
Thank you for emailing me the images on time & for attempting to post again!
these are really beautifully drawn! The only thing I would have to say is maybe add a little more of an indication of a background-like trees or houses?
ReplyDeleteMichelle-- these *are* very nicely drawn. I'm not entirely sure what the story is. I think the man is meeting the woman in the first one and Im assuming by the last one they are together/in love? But what is happening in the middle panel? Where are they going and does it relate to them at the end (are they enduring something together, is this later the same day, is it years later?). Im also not sold on the border with the yin yang... It isnt really adding to the image visually, nor does it seem necessary narratively. viewed as single illustrations, I think it would be distracting.
ReplyDeleteThank you for emailing me the images on time & for attempting to post again!