I love all the detail in these! I think they've got a very nice feel to them and the stylization is great. I'm not sure what the story is, specifically, though. I don't know who Pippi is hugging at the end or where the horse went in the middle panel or if that matters. I think the pacing is a little wide... perhaps consider a different middle or end panel, to tell a tighter story. I also think the space isn't being used as well as it could be. In all 3 the right sides (and the left in the last one) could easily be cropped... the images would probably read better as squares in general. Pippi's arms are REALLY long in the middle one too!
These look so..fun! And I would have never thought to pick Pippi! Good idea. I especially love the way you depict her.
ReplyDeletePippi Longstocking is comin' into your world
A freckled faced red haired girl you ought to know
She'll throw your life into a whirl.
:)
Kaitlin-
ReplyDeleteI love all the detail in these! I think they've got a very nice feel to them and the stylization is great. I'm not sure what the story is, specifically, though. I don't know who Pippi is hugging at the end or where the horse went in the middle panel or if that matters. I think the pacing is a little wide... perhaps consider a different middle or end panel, to tell a tighter story. I also think the space isn't being used as well as it could be. In all 3 the right sides (and the left in the last one) could easily be cropped... the images would probably read better as squares in general. Pippi's arms are REALLY long in the middle one too!
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