
This is my sketch for the project that is due for next week. I'm looking for feedback on it, whether it be from a conceptual, an anatomical, or a compositional standpoint. My words were "meow", "growl", and "poof". I have a large cat (tiger) who usually growls, but is being tamed by a circus ringleader, so he meows instead. The "poof" is where the foggy smoke comes in. I would be submitting this to a culture magazine.
i duno about the meow and growl duality thing, but the tiger and clouds look good. i was a little confused with the ringleaders shadow, maybe consider making it larger or scan a shadded version so we can tell its presence.
ReplyDeleteOk, thanks. Do you (or does anybody else) have a suggestion or idea for how I could incorporate "meow"?
ReplyDeleteHrm.. Tiger with a cub? It still wouldn't technically 'meow' but... it would work without being TOO random. Yet I dunno how that would fit in your composition.
ReplyDeleteI don't think the whip reads too well. at first I thought it was the tail of some prey animal the tiger was chasing.
ReplyDeletesuggestions:
-include the hand holding the whip.
-look at a reference for the whip.