tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post7413894128910299527..comments2023-03-19T10:47:43.996-04:00Comments on MICA: Sophomore Illustration: danamariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15696830706727662654noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-27742626746980580482009-09-26T02:07:00.610-04:002009-09-26T02:07:00.610-04:00I think you're definitely right in redrawing a...I think you're definitely right in redrawing and playing with composition more. Also consider different angles you can take the diner from, and who you want us to pay attention most, and how you want us to 'read' the characters. <br /><br />I remember once I had to do a project that used a large scene full of characteres and before I did it my teacher made me mold out really simple little clay dummies so i could get a look at the way the characters played out in different angles in the same space. Maybe try doing this with your 'diner' with some general objects if you don't have some clay, I think that would help the composition. Moving people less out of the center would also help. I like the diner idea though, I think once you get the general idea down, adding all the little details will really make this fun.Chelseahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15713161918724451254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-493848983949022162009-09-24T22:29:44.558-04:002009-09-24T22:29:44.558-04:00Hmm... I think I like the idea of "stinky lin...Hmm... I think I like the idea of "stinky lines" better than bubbles. I think that would portray it as a burp more so. Now that I see it smaller, I think you were right about moving it over to the left a bit more. It seems a bit cluttered on the right side of the image. Still, I really like the concept of the diner.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02715945748540976175noreply@blogger.com