tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post3963592113647991271..comments2023-03-19T10:47:43.996-04:00Comments on MICA: Sophomore Illustration: danamariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15696830706727662654noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-74011957701130106072011-01-27T20:17:27.816-05:002011-01-27T20:17:27.816-05:00its ok amanda-- i think the picture is good enough...its ok amanda-- i think the picture is good enough that i can get the gist of whats going on & im familiar enough with your work that I can fill in the gaps. <br /><br />i think its a great concept, and i think stylistically its working well. i would just say two things-- one, watch your line quality (maybe its just the image)-- decide if you want clean lines or "fuzzy" lines and stick with it throughout. Vary your line weight for depth too. The value range is a little thin, so you'll want to make sure you use your blacks often enough and carefully enough so the piece has weight, but not so dark that the mood changes. <br /><br />and of course, check the perspective in the nursery... the window and then inside it look like they might be going a little wonky. the nursery also might want a little (subtle) detail-- bunny or chick or storks or flowers or something on the wallpaper-- those are usually much cheerier spaces! <br /><br />otherwise, great!<br />DanaFall 2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/11059369413571520098noreply@blogger.com