tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post2858492052364664657..comments2023-03-19T10:47:43.996-04:00Comments on MICA: Sophomore Illustration: danamariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15696830706727662654noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-69368119841813899962010-02-09T20:34:38.949-05:002010-02-09T20:34:38.949-05:00It's a great character, and you're using t...It's a great character, and you're using the technique really well! He just needs an environment, make heaven more like hell!Nechamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04596123991972762340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-66073795820434606302010-02-09T19:21:58.764-05:002010-02-09T19:21:58.764-05:00I think the drawing reads without the speech bubbl...I think the drawing reads without the speech bubble as well. I also think the flames should fan out more in the background. I really like his face though! It's very intimidating.dellmore90https://www.blogger.com/profile/15380610000450739077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-26736348267128358922010-02-09T18:51:48.617-05:002010-02-09T18:51:48.617-05:00I agree with others who have said that the speech ...I agree with others who have said that the speech bubble is unnecessary. The drawing totally reads without it.<br /><br />I kinda like the background as it is, but maybe some pearly gates would kick it up a notch?<br /><br />I want this on a t-shirt.Greg Bowenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02561312172969930608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-59356234837849808092010-02-09T18:45:06.707-05:002010-02-09T18:45:06.707-05:00I was definitely not reading "name" for ...I was definitely not reading "name" for a long time there. Clarify the text, or leave it out entirely. I like the image, but I agree that there should be more going on in terms of a background. Or maybe not. Perhaps just a re cropping would solve some of the unused space issues.Andrew Sayershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15266769826629539430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-63686074079326985402010-02-09T18:31:47.277-05:002010-02-09T18:31:47.277-05:00I like the concept but think it could be better il...I like the concept but think it could be better illustrated if we could see more of god's body. Maybe it's a choice of style to cut out the body, but I think the idea would be clearer to include more torso. It took me a few seconds to see the overalls which were a nice touch.<br /><br />I'm also not sure about the background. They look like flames which is associated with devils. That may have been your intention but I'd like to see more of a heavenly look. Other than that, nice use of shapes.Michael Kaplanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09404717305422992722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-26014055070783765252010-02-09T18:25:59.073-05:002010-02-09T18:25:59.073-05:00Matt-- Ditto the above; if you are going to have h...Matt-- Ditto the above; if you are going to have him asking for the Name, the font needs to be more committed-- not only a bolder line, but a much more appropriate typeface. What font is what that kind of god would sound like? <br /><br />As for the image itself-- its a little floaty/isolated. It needs a background. Dont feel like you need to make it a cut out just because you are limited from greys. Go back to your original image and give him a sense of place. Your classmates have some good ideas for you. <br />*DanaFall 2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/11059369413571520098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-8048674222900317742010-02-09T18:16:47.659-05:002010-02-09T18:16:47.659-05:00I agree that it needs more fire and I'm entire...I agree that it needs more fire and I'm entirely sure if I like what the speech bubble is doing, though I really like the font, maybe if the flames were more pronounced they could go around the text and pop it up more.LizzyDinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06882117159297097518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-78631547617589993542010-02-09T18:16:24.707-05:002010-02-09T18:16:24.707-05:00I think this is nicely done, I would just work on ...I think this is nicely done, I would just work on the paper and beer can a little more. I agree with Lara that the speech bubble isn't necessary. If you do decide to keep it anyway, I would work on the text style/font.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02715945748540976175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-499527101825929082010-02-09T18:02:39.170-05:002010-02-09T18:02:39.170-05:00I like the character and the desk. It's pretty...I like the character and the desk. It's pretty clear except the paper, beer, and fire...<br />I wish that the fire would look more like a flaming fire.aehyuny:)https://www.blogger.com/profile/01692152832907359913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-70962993848038682542010-02-09T18:01:13.858-05:002010-02-09T18:01:13.858-05:00i think you need to define the "name?", ...i think you need to define the "name?", like bolder lettering or something. i think some sort of texture in the background would really help the piece. also the beer thing, yes. but so far i think your handling the light and the shapes pretty well.nicole ackerman?https://www.blogger.com/profile/15330950271834702528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-45877838456698640952010-02-09T18:00:50.740-05:002010-02-09T18:00:50.740-05:00I like the idea of flames framing the figure. He c...I like the idea of flames framing the figure. He could use a little stubble to go along with his beer. ;) I also think the "name?" could be a little more legible.Hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00443533136683863024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-65971002269089415792010-02-09T17:47:52.928-05:002010-02-09T17:47:52.928-05:00The only thing i would suggest is to make the back...The only thing i would suggest is to make the background more flamey, maybe add some highlights to it to give it that effect and have them burst out more. The ideas really cool, kinda intimidating.Colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10069498639379706628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-45290492071888852652010-02-09T17:44:08.276-05:002010-02-09T17:44:08.276-05:00It would be better if you lessen the black shades ...It would be better if you lessen the black shades in the face and be economical but effective. Actually I don't really understand what the words bubble is saying. It might be better to put more textures in the fire since it dominates large portion of your illustration as the background.Kyung jinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18376852912890003186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-91815208118979316942010-02-09T17:40:42.478-05:002010-02-09T17:40:42.478-05:00I like the way you used shapes of black and white ...I like the way you used shapes of black and white to define god, but i agree that maybe there should be more definition in the backgroundSarah Slowinskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15521926087569201448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-3410970631051976072010-02-09T17:37:08.612-05:002010-02-09T17:37:08.612-05:00not stroner, i meant stronger.
sorry, stroner sou...not stroner, i meant stronger.<br /><br />sorry, stroner sounds like scrotum.Jee-Shaun Wanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04773836278718288120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-64672802910283050632010-02-09T17:36:34.695-05:002010-02-09T17:36:34.695-05:00Yea, I agree with the beer comment.
Have some fo...Yea, I agree with the beer comment. <br /><br />Have some forties littered around the ground or something?<br /><br />other than that, i think the concept works well... Maybe just make the flames fan out more violently.<br /><br />The text of his speech could be a bit stroner.<br /><br />Cool nameplate.Jee-Shaun Wanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04773836278718288120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-61057097221795115362010-02-09T17:34:31.602-05:002010-02-09T17:34:31.602-05:00also I think hes drinking a beer right? you should...also I think hes drinking a beer right? you should define it as beer more clearly because that would add to the unexpectednessSean FitzPatrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01697601946390719549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-64290527077839627912010-02-09T17:33:27.590-05:002010-02-09T17:33:27.590-05:00God is SCARY!
ok I'm just kidding, um I like ...God is SCARY! <br />ok I'm just kidding, um I like the character and the main elements, but I do think it would work better if the entire background was black. It would make the speech Bubble and the halo stand out more, as well as make god seem less confined. Gates would be nice too! i like that element in the previous sketch.<br /><br />I absolutely would not expect god to look like this if i met himSean FitzPatrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01697601946390719549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-86383530800837165862010-02-09T17:32:57.989-05:002010-02-09T17:32:57.989-05:00I think some more background would be nice because...I think some more background would be nice because he looks like he is surrounded by flames. Unless that is what you are going for. Since it is a tiny bit confusing I would add more to explainDeming Harrimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08433723164301383893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-50606748947668562102010-02-09T17:31:11.629-05:002010-02-09T17:31:11.629-05:00I'm not sure the speech bubble is necessary. I...I'm not sure the speech bubble is necessary. If the drawing and talk for itself let it. This is a much more intimidating twist to your previous idea! But I think it works, however, I would like to see some background the black burst behind the desk seems to end pretty abruptly leaving me without a good sense of space or place.Pepper Kaminoffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10962075022914767683noreply@blogger.com