tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post2756233223862917154..comments2023-03-19T10:47:43.996-04:00Comments on MICA: Sophomore Illustration: Geppi's, Collage, and Valentines Day sketches.danamariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15696830706727662654noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-67990463832134825192013-02-15T13:33:35.972-05:002013-02-15T13:33:35.972-05:00The penguins are cuter but the bears show more lov...The penguins are cuter but the bears show more love which would be best for this assignment. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-19198931647830946872013-02-14T14:51:41.506-05:002013-02-14T14:51:41.506-05:00I'm fond of the bears. I'd definitely keep...I'm fond of the bears. I'd definitely keep their poses and the negative space between them. I suppose you could pull back like the other comments are saying, but don't show their whole bodies or I think it will suck the drama out of your composition. I also agree on considering your background.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-68523236324518822572013-02-14T13:57:28.239-05:002013-02-14T13:57:28.239-05:00Frankly, I think the penguins image is the better ...Frankly, I think the penguins image is the better of the two ideas, but if you do want to go with the bears, we need to see more of them and something that suggests love as strongly as the shared scarf wrapped around the penguins.Ben Callahanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05663419559306316352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-65984375108905147922013-02-13T23:23:11.480-05:002013-02-13T23:23:11.480-05:00Personally I just want you to zoom out so you can ...Personally I just want you to zoom out so you can see more of the body's but that's because I'm picturing them really chubby and cute. But I agree with Grace I really like the negative space, maybe if you zoomed out enough to see the curve of their necks?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-46392516308611403992013-02-13T23:23:00.326-05:002013-02-13T23:23:00.326-05:00Personally I just want you to zoom out so you can ...Personally I just want you to zoom out so you can see more of the body's but that's because I'm picturing them really chubby and cute. But I agree with Grace I really like the negative space, maybe if you zoomed out enough to see the curve of their necks?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-76502105520471223862013-02-13T22:19:19.197-05:002013-02-13T22:19:19.197-05:00I agree that if you go with the polar bears you ne...I agree that if you go with the polar bears you need more of a sense of space. If you're wanting to keep it more zoomed in perhaps add some more interesting elements like snow, or more details in the fur that breaks up the space and keeps it from being too monotonous. <br />But super adorable!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-3416034116406007392013-02-13T22:06:47.495-05:002013-02-13T22:06:47.495-05:00Adorable! I don't think the negative space wor...Adorable! I don't think the negative space works for me, but if you zoom it out I might leave it like that. :) Good luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-29068471552923418452013-02-13T22:02:58.375-05:002013-02-13T22:02:58.375-05:00The penguins one is so adorable! I'd go with ...The penguins one is so adorable! I'd go with that and zoom in a bit more. Also, establish a light source. Awesome job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-33903013902933311642013-02-13T21:15:09.423-05:002013-02-13T21:15:09.423-05:00I like the negative space created with the two pol...I like the negative space created with the two polar bears, but I do think it would be stronger zoomed out. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-91499679106181272052013-02-13T20:28:22.732-05:002013-02-13T20:28:22.732-05:00I agree with Trace regarding choosing the penguins...I agree with Trace regarding choosing the penguins over the bears. <br /><br />However, both have a very strong element of cuteness so it could go either way. It'd be cool if you implemented a 3rd object to the bear piece (like the scarf) to see how they can interact with it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335147741802617902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-66698016044356691142013-02-13T20:23:55.461-05:002013-02-13T20:23:55.461-05:00Both are so cute!
I think I like the penguins ev...Both are so cute! <br /><br />I think I like the penguins even better because of the added element of the scarf. Seems like it takes more advantage of you being able to add whatever you want to make the animals as cute as possible. TraceByrdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756738399138412901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-68081899813055866632013-02-13T20:19:23.804-05:002013-02-13T20:19:23.804-05:00I would zoom out of the valentines images more. I would zoom out of the valentines images more. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7790044800311554835.post-75106057691931194142013-02-13T20:18:01.411-05:002013-02-13T20:18:01.411-05:00Polar bears are the besssst.
One thing you could c...Polar bears are the besssst.<br />One thing you could consider is zooming out a bit more (kinda like the penguins) to emphasize their embrace. Think about a light source, and is it snowing? <br /><br />-rAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com